Wednesday, February 27, 2019
Puppy Haiku
In Te Hiringa last week we have been learning to write a Haiku poem. A Haiku is a Japanese poem that has three lines. On the first line there has to be five syllables, on the second line there has to be seven syllables, on the third line there has to be five syllables. Here is my Haiku about puppies.
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To madison I like the way that you talks about what the pups can do and i like the way that you did all of the rest of your blog post to from Delilah frome yaldhurst model school
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ReplyDeletenext time you could add a bit more detail about puppys.
This reminded me of my puppy at home. I liked the way you said the word then had a matching picture
Hey Madison It is Mykiala from Yaldhurst model school I love this blog post mabey next time you could add more things like why are there puppies in this post next time you could put in I have dog's in this post because ... ok hope that was helpful.
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Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you explained what you were doing and added some photos of really cute puppies. One thing about the pictures though, I'm pretty sure they are dogs, not puppies.
When I read your post I found out that you are learning how to make these cool poems.
Next time, you could add some more words or some cool font and gradient colors to your writing.
Quick question, why did you put the weird black lines there?
I think it's time to end it here, goodbye Madison, have a great time!
hi again maddy do you watch one direction on your chrome book at free time
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